Evaluating my magazine designs

I asked my teacher to look at the plan of my magazine to see whether the genre is clear. We discussed this and decided that the images i wish to take and the contents of my magazine will be more 'pop music'. The masthead does not connote this as 'Boombox' describes dance music more than pop. To resolve this problem, i am going to change the masthead of my magazine so it fits in with the girly pop theme. I am also changing the layout of my double page spread. On the left page will be a variety of different photos in different sizes, shapes. The model will be in different poses and looking like they are having fun. On the right page will be all writing about the person on the left page.